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fairytale project way to the tree by Abuze fairytale project way to the tree by Abuze
another piece for my fairytale project. i m glad if you give me critique so i can improve the picture. :)
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saku-z Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014  Student Filmographer
beautiful
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pixelbudah Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Your work is superb!
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Stacey104201 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Student Writer
Is it in front of a water fall? Sorry if I'm wrong.
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bugfacegard Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012
try and get more form into it and increase the value range.
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CapitanaRecondita Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Professional
wonderful!!!
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BelPetr Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012
Liked it! Beautifully.
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NarnianGriff23 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012
Lovely job
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AgentSpax Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
These are all so wonderful!
I can't wait until you have more done C:
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Nikker Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
First I want to say that I love your landscape pieces; I really want to start trying to put atmospheres like this together, myself. The tree is very real looking with the peeking branches and the different levels of light give the appearance of a full, leafy tree, despite the fact that you haven't gone through and tried to draw every individual leaf. The color scheme and glowy lighting are great.

I feel like the size and shape of the canvas in conjunction with the shape and positioning of the tree make this feel a bit plain. The leafy part of the tree is far too much of a focus on the piece. With the vertical lines of the tall rocks, and with the rocks obstructing our view in the foreground, a portrait-shaped canvas might accentuate the piece a bit better. The free-standing pillars of rock are daunting and important, and the mimicking of their general shape would give more of a balance to the entire piece. If you did wantto stick with a landscape shaped piece, though, a simple rule of thirds could possibly do. One last little thing is that empty space below the tree roots is (the orange triangle at the bottom of the canvas.) It seems as if roots and vines might be hanging here, a bit, or perhaps that the edge of the rocks here are too straight; something more organic might be more appropriate.
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Zerrnichter Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
yep yep adding a little dark area to the middle of the tree might improve it, but as always it is just beautiful :iconlove:
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red--june Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
I want to go there ;___; so pretty
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Krazzulimaii Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow...


O.O
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zamaranthine Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
I agree with darkening some areas, and maybe add a little more detail to some areas than others for some good contrast for the eye. :] Looks really cool.
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axeheads Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Maybe darken some areas? It's a very beautiful piece, but the majority of the shades are very similar, and it doesn't make for much contrast. Apart from that, it's lovely! :D
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Aminirus Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Just beautiful. The warmth of the colors and the overall look is very magical!
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Raika-Boss Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol when i look like this- i think Yggdrasil.

Mah-- to many fantasy games I tell you haha-- anyway, great job! All I'd want to say is the rock to the right seems to be catching my eye more than the tree.

and I'm not sure but maybe adding some more adding more light to the top rock to the left would bring some more out.

I can't see a straight out light source so that's why I suppose My eyes wonder around a lot wondering where the lights come from whether it be from the back or to the left.


Some things to point out I suppose. -- Wonderful job!
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Raika-Boss Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(ugh mind the typos >x<)
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Christa-Kinde Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012   Writer
Love the luminous light... and all those little gaps amidst the raised roots. Such a wonderful atmosphere!
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chrisb7 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
Nice scene
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DisneyFanJulia Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
amazing :D
though there seems a lack of focus in a spot. Sharpen up an area to give it depth :)
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thanksthatisenough Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
Fantastic
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swordsmanyukiri Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
I love how you gave the tree branches some detail :D and from an angle it looks like a bonsai tree...that's probably just me
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Alberthein1 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
You've done a great job, really...
the thinner branches look same coloured with a slight transition, but no leaves to cover the lack of detail (on the top right of the tree). as if made with simple lines. this ofcourse isn't that bad, but it just contrasts to the other branches like on the left side, which are better, partily because of coverage which gives them more detail. I do not have much critisism to add further though, like that the rougher white patch in the background to the left could look a little more misty, which gives the tree extra effect, just like in unison with the rest. I admit myself, that this commentary seems a bit... too much on little things, but I hope it helps. Your art is wonderful for the latter, and lots of music fit this tree brilliantly. If you want, I could give you a few examples if you want.
(Like the song "Nausicaš of the Valley of the Wind - a princess who loves bugs", or FF 13-1 music in general)
the piece of art is a good one, and is a favourite of mine now :)
May many more come.
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falia Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Very nice mood piece! Perhaps add some particles - leaves, drops of spray from the waterfall, pollen floating on the breeze - to add a bit of life?
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Salvia21 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
beautiful!
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pajmo9 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very beautiful atmosphereic effect.

Is that a waterfall in the background?
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Abuze Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Professional General Artist
yes :D glad you recognized it. :)
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